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Post by darth me1 on Tue 07 Aug 2012, 11:14

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Hmmm anything i can do improve on this?
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Re: Arturo Vidal

Post by Fowlisss on Tue 07 Aug 2012, 20:20

You could to more imo, perhaps blend it more by erasing his sides a little, and add something on top, maybe scratches or something along them lines, I look at some similar to mine for inspiration before I started, that helps.

Keep goin! Colours are nice too
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Re: Arturo Vidal

Post by FB Slothmeister on Thu 09 Aug 2012, 01:44

Colours = Love them, I like the effects although prefer the left side (his Right), Maybe blend his arms abit more and add some text, Really like it so far though and has all the making for a fantastic sig.

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Re: Arturo Vidal

Post by Hayden. on Thu 09 Aug 2012, 07:15

You can do better in my opinion. I think you need to lower the brightness and perhaps heighten the contrast here, there's not much depth to the color, it seems slightly faded. The light effects around the render are a good idea but I feel its missing something which imo makes it look unfinished, looks a great start though. But yeah the render's colors (especially the face) are poor imo, you need to add some shape and feel to the sig rather than overload it with brightness. I think adding some shapes (or C4D textures) and working into them would look great, perhaps some technical text work as well.

All in all a good start, kiu. Smile
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