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Post by TheMightyDobbo on Thu 19 Jul 2012, 01:46

4 versions, comment on which is best and what needs to be improved Very Happy

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Re: Ezequiel Lavezzi - Napoli

Post by StevieG895 on Thu 19 Jul 2012, 01:48

#2 for me, colour is better and im not really into the text.. if you reduced the height a bit and but a better text, it would be great Smile
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Re: Ezequiel Lavezzi - Napoli

Post by Fowlisss on Thu 19 Jul 2012, 01:51

v4 is by far the best for me, text was bad on the previous, but perhaps try to size it down? them dimensions are a bit... peculiar? Smile
v2 is also a nice colour scheme, they're very similar but different colours it seems, so either of them!

Other than that, it's a solid sig, blended nicely
Although I don't really like how visible the face is behind him, try lowering opacity or even changing the direction it's facing on the other side

Also the face really stands out, but because that's the only part of the sig in normal colour, i'd try lowering saturation on that or including it in the gradient map


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Re: Ezequiel Lavezzi - Napoli

Post by TheMightyDobbo on Thu 19 Jul 2012, 02:07

Fowlisss wrote:
Also the face really stands out, but because that's the only part of the sig in normal colour, i'd try lowering saturation on that or including it in the gradient map


Keep working!

my aim for this was to highlight the red areas in his skin tone and to do that i thought this would be the best way to show it working, i'm resizing it atm as well Smile
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Re: Ezequiel Lavezzi - Napoli

Post by TheMightyDobbo on Thu 19 Jul 2012, 02:49

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Re: Ezequiel Lavezzi - Napoli

Post by FB Slothmeister on Thu 19 Jul 2012, 03:01

Love v2 although the face is abit to bright, maybe take it down abit.
Also he seems to be in the wrong kit Wink haha

EDIT: Just seen your new one, must improved and i really like the text, the Lavezzi font is really nice, which one is it?
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Re: Ezequiel Lavezzi - Napoli

Post by d0nkd0nk on Thu 19 Jul 2012, 03:05

The latest one is very nice. Great blending. The text is too plain imo, maybe add a clipping mask.
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Re: Ezequiel Lavezzi - Napoli

Post by TheMightyDobbo on Thu 19 Jul 2012, 05:53

i was thinking of putting a clipping mask on as well.
changed the top text as well

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@Slothmeister the text is Tw Cen MT Condensed Extra Bold. Standard text in photoshop.
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Re: Ezequiel Lavezzi - Napoli

Post by Gamerking17 on Thu 19 Jul 2012, 07:12

TheMightyDobbo wrote:i was thinking of putting a clipping mask on as well.
changed the top text as well

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@Slothmeister the text is Tw Cen MT Condensed Extra Bold. Standard text in photoshop.
I love that version Shocked

Text is very nice, fits in well with the sig. Great blending and a nice background Smile Good job afro
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Re: Ezequiel Lavezzi - Napoli

Post by TheMightyDobbo on Mon 23 Jul 2012, 12:14

stopped his face from being red
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Re: Ezequiel Lavezzi - Napoli

Post by Besiktas on Wed 08 Aug 2012, 04:29

TheMightyDobbo wrote:stopped his face from being red
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Amazing sig! improoved a lot from the first versions
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