Ezequiel Lavezzi - Napoli

4 versions, comment on which is best and what needs to be improved

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#2 for me, colour is better and im not really into the text.. if you reduced the height a bit and but a better text, it would be great

v4 is by far the best for me, text was bad on the previous, but perhaps try to size it down? them dimensions are a bit... peculiar?
v2 is also a nice colour scheme, they're very similar but different colours it seems, so either of them!

Other than that, it's a solid sig, blended nicely
Although I don't really like how visible the face is behind him, try lowering opacity or even changing the direction it's facing on the other side

Also the face really stands out, but because that's the only part of the sig in normal colour, i'd try lowering saturation on that or including it in the gradient map


Keep working!

Fowlisss wrote:
Also the face really stands out, but because that's the only part of the sig in normal colour, i'd try lowering saturation on that or including it in the gradient map


Keep working!

my aim for this was to highlight the red areas in his skin tone and to do that i thought this would be the best way to show it working, i'm resizing it atm as well

Love v2 although the face is abit to bright, maybe take it down abit.
Also he seems to be in the wrong kit haha

EDIT: Just seen your new one, must improved and i really like the text, the Lavezzi font is really nice, which one is it?

The latest one is very nice. Great blending. The text is too plain imo, maybe add a clipping mask.

i was thinking of putting a clipping mask on as well.
changed the top text as well

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@Slothmeister the text is Tw Cen MT Condensed Extra Bold. Standard text in photoshop.

TheMightyDobbo wrote:i was thinking of putting a clipping mask on as well.
changed the top text as well

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@Slothmeister the text is Tw Cen MT Condensed Extra Bold. Standard text in photoshop.

I love that version

Text is very nice, fits in well with the sig. Great blending and a nice background Good job

stopped his face from being red
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TheMightyDobbo wrote:stopped his face from being red
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Amazing sig! improoved a lot from the first versions