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Post by LFCMessi on Mon 30 Jul 2012, 19:40

So what do you think it's one of my first desktop background. I also think I might have overdone with overlays...

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Re: Yann M'Vila - France

Post by Gamerking17 on Mon 30 Jul 2012, 22:30

Yeah, the overlays are overdone a bit Laughing First of all, it desperately needs a light source just above his head Smile

Overall I do like it though, the bit around his leg is real nice. It's just a bit too dark Smile
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Re: Yann M'Vila - France

Post by LFCMessi on Tue 31 Jul 2012, 00:59

Thanks for the feedback, glad you liked it though Smile
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Re: Yann M'Vila - France

Post by FB Slothmeister on Tue 31 Jul 2012, 01:51

I really like the effect around his right arm and leg, not too keen on the effect on his left arm though, The smoke in the background works well however like said above its a little to dark, try adding some lighting to his face and also maybe a gradient map.

Nice for your first wallpaper mate, i did my first one and their tricky. Keep it up (KIU) afro
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Re: Yann M'Vila - France

Post by LFCMessi on Tue 31 Jul 2012, 02:20

Thanks for the feedback, but I have already added a gradient map...
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Re: Yann M'Vila - France

Post by FB Slothmeister on Tue 31 Jul 2012, 02:27

LFCMessi wrote:Thanks for the feedback, but I have already added a gradient map...

Ah right, well experiment with them, gradient maps can greatly improve pieces, also try mixing 2 together.
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Re: Yann M'Vila - France

Post by LFCMessi on Tue 31 Jul 2012, 03:09

Might try that idea sometime. Thanks for the tip Wink
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