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Yann M'Vila - France

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Post by LFCMessi Mon 30 Jul 2012, 19:40

So what do you think it's one of my first desktop background. I also think I might have overdone with overlays...

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Post by Gamerking17 Mon 30 Jul 2012, 22:30

Yeah, the overlays are overdone a bit Laughing First of all, it desperately needs a light source just above his head Smile

Overall I do like it though, the bit around his leg is real nice. It's just a bit too dark Smile
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Post by LFCMessi Tue 31 Jul 2012, 00:59

Thanks for the feedback, glad you liked it though Smile
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Post by FB Slothmeister Tue 31 Jul 2012, 01:51

I really like the effect around his right arm and leg, not too keen on the effect on his left arm though, The smoke in the background works well however like said above its a little to dark, try adding some lighting to his face and also maybe a gradient map.

Nice for your first wallpaper mate, i did my first one and their tricky. Keep it up (KIU) afro
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Post by LFCMessi Tue 31 Jul 2012, 02:20

Thanks for the feedback, but I have already added a gradient map...
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Post by FB Slothmeister Tue 31 Jul 2012, 02:27

LFCMessi wrote:Thanks for the feedback, but I have already added a gradient map...

Ah right, well experiment with them, gradient maps can greatly improve pieces, also try mixing 2 together.
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Post by LFCMessi Tue 31 Jul 2012, 03:09

Might try that idea sometime. Thanks for the tip Wink
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